Comments on: Re: One September Evening http://www.hippocketpress.org/sisyphus/2009/07/re-one-september-evening/ SISYPHUS is a magazine that focuses on contemporary issues surrounding art, culture, and language. Fri, 18 Nov 2011 21:19:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: weatherly http://www.hippocketpress.org/sisyphus/2009/07/re-one-september-evening/comment-page-1/#comment-10 weatherly Thu, 23 Jul 2009 08:35:06 +0000 http://www.hippocketpress.org/sisyphus/?p=36#comment-10 Barbara Joan, you know that I even have criticisms of great poems, like this one. I don't like the verb "to be" in poems, but admit sometimes it belongs. I may BE just an old crank. I love the poem. You could the green tea steeped and a word came to mind but slid out again, there steam and dark French chocolate with an essay, all after lunch as an example. I took out all the "to be" from "Storm" by HD and I have an adolescent crush there. Your music swings, your image of thought, social and idiolectic, precisely subjective as should. This second generation of your House is different and good. How you be, gal? Barbara Joan, you know that I even have criticisms of great poems, like this one. I don’t like the verb “to be” in poems, but admit sometimes it belongs. I may BE just an old crank. I love the poem. You could

the green tea steeped and a word
came to mind but slid out again,
there steam and dark French
chocolate with an essay, all after lunch

as an example. I took out all the “to be” from “Storm” by HD and I have an adolescent crush there. Your music swings, your image of thought, social and idiolectic, precisely subjective as should. This second generation of your House is different and good.

How you be, gal?

]]>